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08 April 2011 @ 04:54 pm
▲ la douleur exquise  
A/N: open ended. LIKE A BOSS.


The music coming from Jonghyun's earphones was impossible to hear with the talking of his classmates. He snatches them off his head, hanging them around his neck, and sighs.

"It's called a 'free period' not a 'talk your ass off convention'." Jonghyun says, turning to face Kibum.

Kibum just shrugs and goes back to reading his book. How he was even able to read amongst the noise, was beyond Jonghyun.

"Hey, Kibum, what're you reading?" Jonghyun asks, grabbing his book.

"Hey!" Kibum complains.

"Don't worry, I saved the page." Jonghyun mumbles, turning the book over to read the title. "La douleur exquise?" Jonghyun says, butchering the french words. Kibum just laughs and snatches his book back.

"It's la douleur exquise." Kibum says, correcting him, and goes back to reading.

"Well, what's it about?" Jonghyun asks.

"It's about this French soldier who can't be with the woman he loves." Kibum says, hesitantly.

"Why not?" Jonghyun asks, raising his eyebrows.

"Well, she already has a husband. Oh, and she doesn't love him in return because he's terribly disfigured from the war." Kibum says.

"You know, that's really fucking depressing, I don't see how you can read that." Jonghyun shakes his head.

"Well, I guess I can relate to it..." Kibum says quietly.

Jonghyun just looks at him with sorrowful eyes.


"You know you don't have to sit with me." Kibum says, looking at Jonghyun. "You should be sitting with the popular kids, you know, where you belong."

"If I wanted to sit with them, don't you think I would? Chill out." Jonghyun says, biting into his lunch.

"I'm sure they must think stuff by now..." He replies.

Jonghyun sighs and grabs Kibum's face, "I don't care what they think, you're more important."

Kibum blushes and pushes Jonghyun's hands away.

He hated how nice Jonghyun was, which brought along the inevitable love he felt towards him. But Jonghyun isn't gay, he would remind himself everyday.

"You gonna eat that?" Jonghyun asks, giving his best puppy face.

Kibum just laughs and shoves the rest of his food towards Jonghyun.


you can't go on like this forever.

Kibum draws a shooting star on the side of his paper, he was bored out of his mind. Jonghyun wasn't there, and he's the only one Kibum could talk to in this class.

"Hey, are you and Jjong dating?" His classmate Onew asks, turning around in his seat. "Everyone's wondering, and we just want to know."

"No." Kibum replies involuntarily. He had gotten this question several times before, so had Jonghyun. He would always tell Kibum about people asking him and he would just laugh, "Can't people be friends anymore?"


obviously not.

Kibum was in a very delicate situation, and the way he saw it, he only had 2 options.

1 - stop being friends with jonghyun. how could you just be 'friends' with someone you loved?


2 - confess to jonghyun and hope for the best.

He decided that if he went through with option #2, then #1 would have to follow along, most likely.

Jonghyun had returned to school, telling Kibum about how sick he had been and asking if they had any homework.

"Miss me?" Jonghyun asks, smiling brightly.

Kibum laughs and nods, "Definitely, wanna come over later?"

"Sure." Jonghyun replies.

After school, when Jonghyun arrives, they both settle on the couch to do their homework.

"It's such a pretty day." Kibum says.

"Yeah, it is." Jonghyun replies, glancing out the window.

"Jjong, can I tell you something truthfully?" Kibum asks, pulling his knees to his chest.

"I doubt you need my permission." Jonghyun laughs.

"Okay..." Kibum says quietly and Jonghyun playfully hits him on the shoulder, "Just say it."

"Well, I think I love you." Kibum says after a brief silence.

Jonghyun glances over and laughs, "Well, of course, we're best friends."

"You know what I mean, so just leave if you can't accept it." Kibum says, eyes to the ground.

Jonghyun widens his eyes and stands, "You're serious?"

By the look on Kibum's face, he could tell he meant it, but he didn't stay long enough for a clarification.


Kibum drags his feet into class the next day and walks over to his teacher. "Do you think I could sit in the front from now on? I've been having such a terrible time seeing." She nods and points to an empty desk.

He sits down and reads his book, ignoring the stares from his classmates, and Jonghyun as he walks in.

Of course, as Kibum had guessed, Jonghyun stopped talking to him.

He even started hanging out with the popular kids, as Kibum had suggested before. He started cracking jokes with them, aimed towards Kibum.


weeks later.

Kibum finally finishes his book. At the end, the French soldier commits suicide, and its looking more and more like the thing he should do.

But he needed closure first.

"Hey, can we talk?" Kibum asks Jonghyun at lunch, ignoring the whispers from his friends.

Jonghyun looks surprised and nods, following Kibum to an excluded area in the courtyard.

"What do you want? You haven't talked to me in a while." Jonghyun says, crossing his arms.

"Would you have even responded if I would have?" Kibum asks.

Jonghyun bites his lip, "Seriously, what do you want?"

Kibum sighs, fed up with everything he's had to deal with since his confession, "I just want to know, do you hate me now? Like, just tell me how you feel."

"I don't feel anything, I'm pretty content actually." Jonghyun replies, not making eye contact with Kibum.

"Is it really so easy for you to forget all the time we've spent together?" Kibum asks, clenching his fists.

Jonghyun sighs, "Of course not, there are times when I do miss you."

"Then why can't we just go back to the way we were before?" Kibum asks, reaching for Jonghyun's hand.

Jonghyun flinches away and Kibum just looks down in pain.

"There's no way, I have a girlfriend now, I can't be playing your games." Jonghyun says.

"This isn't a game!" Kibum shouts, earning glances from people eating. Tears are brimming his eyelids.

"Well, whatever it is, don't involve me." Jonghyun whispers, giving Kibum a cold stare. "Can I go back to my lunch now?"

Kibum smiles bitterly, "You can do whatever you want."

Jonghyun stands there and stares at Kibum before he shakes his head and walks away.


Kibum slides the book over to the librarian.

"Did you enjoy it?" She asks cheerily.

"It's one of my favorites." He replies.

"It's one of our best fiction novels." She says.

"I think you should put it under autobiography."
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Current Music: Wherever You Are - ワンオクロック
taeminrapetaeminrape on April 8th, 2011 08:53 pm (UTC)
s p o t f o r k_pop4life

The Queen of Disaster~k_pop4life on April 8th, 2011 11:15 pm (UTC)
I love you <3. My spot is wonderful
I love the connection betweeen books and whatnot it truly does since I love reading &hearts
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I hate sad endings, I hate them, UGHHH... 
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Specially if Kibum suffers!!! 
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Stupid Dino you didn't have to stop talking to Kibum don't you see wat you did? Asshole!!! Fics like this make me want to punch him in the face
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The ending was my favorite part, sad but it still touched me... 

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taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 04:37 am (UTC)
Re: I love you <3. My spot is wonderful
yay for readingggg :DD

i'm sorry! i love sad endings haha

i know poor bummie ~


aw, well, at least it touched you :DD ♥

hitoshisakuraihitoshisakurai on April 8th, 2011 09:55 pm (UTC)
I should be already sleeping *Miyavi's concert is on Sunday and I need to prepare for it mentally*, but when I saw that there's a new posted ff I couldn't resist.
And... wow.
Wait, I need some coherent words.
Why do I feel as if it was written about me? Only that I never chose the 2nd option and now I still suffer like Bummie? Though I think it would turn out the same in my case. Oh my.
And you know... though it's a onesided JongKey and has no happy ending I think it's one of the reasons that makes this story so unique. We have a plenty of angsts with happy ending or one sided JK that turn into mutual affection. And yours is just a pure slice of life. And that made me love this story so crazily.
The opened-ending... is there any chance for you to continue this story??
♥ ♥ ♥
taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 03:16 am (UTC)
*wish i was going to miyavi's concert omg*

oh, my, that's rather sad D:
and yeah, i feel like angst stories should typically have angst endings as well, but that rarely happens...
and i honestly didn't really think about a continuation because i wouldn't be able to make much happen except for more angst and the cliché apology etc...
but i might haha, it's a possibility ^^ ♥
naemi_ahnaemi_ah on April 8th, 2011 10:06 pm (UTC)
omg! i totally love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you can't end the story like that!, well, you can but please write a sequel to it, pretty please? ^^
taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 03:04 am (UTC)
thank you ^^ ♥
hm, i really was debating whether or not to write a sequel... but i really like angsty endings and i know that if i write a sequel there won't be much material...
i might though haha, if i get inspired :3
fr4nkenstien: jjong sobbingfr4nkenstien on April 8th, 2011 11:22 pm (UTC)
OMG THAT WAS SO SAD ;____________;
TEARSSSS. <333333~!
taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 02:42 am (UTC)
LOL yay ~
it was supposed to be sad :DD
sorry for the tears though, hahaha ♥
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taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 02:37 am (UTC)
awww sorry bb D;

and i'll totesssssssss spot you omg ♥
as long as you promise to read them ^^

lol thanks ~ :DD ♥

INDEED, poor key.
yokomyayokomya on April 9th, 2011 02:34 am (UTC)
私は好きだ!本当にすごいです!^___________^ ♥
taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 03:40 am (UTC)
ありがとうございます。♥ ヽ(´▽`)/
愛してる *creeper face*
bearicasatabearicasata on April 9th, 2011 06:40 am (UTC)
love it.. even though im not a fan of sad endings, i really like this!! <3
taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 06:29 pm (UTC)
thanks! i'm glad :D ♥
i like sad endings though haha sorry ~
bearicasatabearicasata on April 10th, 2011 12:25 pm (UTC)
well its okay anyway! i really love how you write these things haha.. :D

taeminrapetaeminrape on April 12th, 2011 08:56 pm (UTC)
thank you omg ~ :DD ♥
melalocketmelalocket on April 9th, 2011 06:44 am (UTC)
why you did that to my bumieeee T_____________T
its sooooo sad T__________T
♕ chinguline trashyolseo on April 9th, 2011 04:01 pm (UTC)
i think my heart just broke for kibum, omg ide. ;_____; i wanted to slap jonghyun in the face for that. DD:
oh, and i really, really like this. ♥ :3
taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 06:30 pm (UTC)
everyone wants to slap jjong haha
and thank you ^^ ♥
taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 06:30 pm (UTC)
sorry ^^;; haha ♥
erdea on April 9th, 2011 05:04 pm (UTC)
I hate you Jjong! you broke my bummie's heart T__T
/sobbing at the corner
taeminrapetaeminrape on April 9th, 2011 06:31 pm (UTC)
awww *consoles you*
it's alright ~ lol ♥
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taeminrapetaeminrape on September 5th, 2011 11:27 pm (UTC)
long time no speak hehe ~ ;D ♥
and thank you so much! ^w^